Halloween Narrative

This is my practice writing for my writing test next week. It is not finished.

Where?  At aunty Mel’s house which is planted in the middle of the forest

What? Cesar the dog and Samantha got lost in the mysterious room that looks like nothing in there but actually it was portal to where ghosts live

Who?  Joshua, Samantha, Aunty Mel, parents Cesar dog and Caspar How? Their parents dropped them off

Why? Joshua and Samantha go to there aunt Mel’s house for the weekends

When? After school on the day before Halloween

2 days before Halloween, and Samantha and I pack our bags for the weekends, where we will spending Halloween at our Aunt Mel’s house. Did I mention it was planted in the middle of the creepiest forest in the world, at least that’s what Cesar and I think ( Cesar is my dog ).

After school, Mum and Dad drop Me, Samantha and Cesar off at Aunt Mel’s house. Luckily the sun was out because if it wasn't, we probably would be lost in the incredibly thick forest of DOOM. So when we got there they just chucked us out of the car and left.  

“Hello, children,” Aunt Mel says trying to smother us with   

her soggy kisses.