Twisted Fairytale Movie Storyboard

This is the storyboard to the movie that might be posted on my blog next. Our movie is a twisted fairytale, Goldey Locks and the three bears. 

Type of Shot	Voice Over	Action
Title: Once, there lived a girl - Close up	Once lived a girl named Paris	Close up on Monike
Establishing Shot - 3 secondsWide - long shot	that had beautiful golden locks she was as tall as a tree and had amazing brown eyes.	Monike standing in the green screen room, and the green screen would, be of a kingdom Lisia will draw.
Title
Close Up	she was born with golden hair	close up of the girl with Monike’s golden/blonde hair.
A camera shot from one of the brunet peoples view. For only 2 seconds	this was a problem because everyone in the kingdom were brunets	her in the middle of a circle. Odd one out cause she is the only one with golden/blonde hair.
Wide shot - 3 seconds	So at the age of 12 she gets kicked out of her own kingdom	Her Mum (Queen - Kaycee) kicking her out of the kingdom/school.
Title - Forced to live in a mountain	Forced to live in a mountain	Monike sitting on a little hill thing.
	she found a boy	Monike acting like she found her brother (Richard).
Title - LONG LOST BROTHER -	This particular boy was in fact her long lost brother....	Monike and richard playing a game or 21 questions.
Title - WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?	WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?	they finished asking questions about each other and leave together.
Title - SEE THE MOVIE....	SEE THE MOVIE....	4 of september
Title - ....NEVER!	....NEVER!	but for real never!!!!!...
Final Shot - leaves audience wanting to see your movie.	______________________	The scene of Monike and Sonny fading away into blackness ...